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High school takedownYou're not allowed to use this work without my permission, it's relating to a fictional school shooting. I've wrote more than this, I need people to tell me what's good and bad about my peice, comments welcome.High school takedown
I couldn't afford to fuck around anymore. I was meeting up with Jeremy to show him what I can do. I was 10 minutes early. Nothing could prepare him for what was coming; I still had to adjust my weapon.
I approached the abandoned warehouse with my blacked out windows car. I am wearing a shirt along with black trousers, along with some shades. I parked the car outside the warehouse; I noticed the walls of the p
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